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Motivation/ section euro
Message de ludy posté le 05-03-2021 à 17:17:03 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
afin d'intégrer la section euro-anglais je dois écrire une lettre de motivation en anglais.
Voici la première version, pouvez-vous me corriger ou me donner des conseils ?
Merci pour vos réponses.

March 3rd, 2021
Position: [...].

Cover Letter, European section:

Dear Madam,

I am writing to you to show you my motivation for applying for the European-English section. I am currently in 9th grade student (3°) at (nom du collège) Middle school.

I want to improve my English as much as possible. First, for personal reasons like traveling. Second, for professional reasons because I want to be architect so History and English are some important school subject.
I am interested in English Culture and History very much. And generally in other countries. I went to London for two weeks, I discovered British Culture and I really adored it.

I know that this section require more work and involvement but it does not bother for me. It would be a real chance for me and my future.

Thank you, in advance for your consideration. If you have any question I am available by mail or telephone.

Yours sincerely,

first name, name

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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-03-2021 17:52
Gris et forum

Réponse : Motivation/ section euro de gerondif, postée le 05-03-2021 à 18:10:04 (S | E)
Bonjour
Erreurs en bleu
Dear Madam,

I am writing to you to show you my motivation for applying(to + base verbale) for the European-English section. I am currently in a 9th grade student (3°) at (nom du collège) Middle school.

I want to improve my English as much as possible. First, for personal reasons like traveling. Second, for professional reasons because I want to be an architect so History and English are some important school subject(pluriel).
I am interested in English Culture and History very much(à mettre devant interested). And generally(supprimer le point et mettre as well as in..) in other (foreign) countries. I went to London for two weeks (dater ?), I discovered British Culture and I really adored it.

I know that this section require(soit un présent et il manque le s, soit un futur) more work and involvement but it does not bother ~~for~~ me. It would be a real chance (faux ami)for me and my future.

Thank you,(ôter la virgule) in advance for your consideration. If you have any question,(don't hesitate to contact me by c'est un peu présomptueux de dire à un principal "je suis disponible..".)I am available by mail or telephone.

Yours sincerely,

Quelques points à réviser ou à apprendre.
a devant les noms de métier : I am a teacher, je suis prof. I want to be an architect.

Les trois pour.
1) for + nom :This present is for you. Who is this present for ? (appelé autrefois complément d'attribution)
2) to + base verbale, notion de but : What are you here for ? Dna quel but es-tu là ? I am here to help you. I am writing to ask for information...
3) for + ing: notion de cause. He was arrested for speeding. Thank you for helping me, merci de m'avoir aidé.

Chance en anglais , c'est le hasard, une occasion aléatoire. If by chance you meet him, si vous le rencontrez par hasard.
opportunity, c'est une chance, une occasion de faire quelque chose. a good opportunity.

Dictionnaire en ligne : avoir la chance de faire [qch] loc adv + prép (bénéficier heureusement de) have the opportunity to do [sth] v expr

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