Playing with words/46

Playing with words/46
Message de here4u posté le 06-08-2023 à 23:08:27 (S | E | F)
Hello dear Friends!

Voici votre nouveau challenge ! "Playing and working with words"... La date limite pour cet exercice est fin août 2023.
Je vous rappelle que cet exercice a des règles qui doivent être respectées. Lisez-les bien si vous ne les connaissez pas ! Ce travail est loin d'être un jeu... mais il peut être très ludique... Il vous laisse également toute liberté de choisir votre thème!

Using THE 8 WORDS given below (the 2 verbs can be put in whatever tenses or forms you fancy but MUST remain verbs!), 2 adjectives or adverbs, 2 nouns and 2 link words, + a given structure and the suitable punctuation, search your minds, think hard and create AN ONLY meaningful SENTENCE. "Easy", isn't it? (In fact, it's more easily said than done and advanced learners or natives can step in!! )

- You CANNOT change the nature of the words!
- You CANNOT use two or more compulsory words consecutively!

PLEASE, WHEN YOU WRITE YOUR SENTENCE, PUT CAPITALS TO THE GIVEN WORDS! [and specify the number of words at the end.]

Je vous rappelle qu'« une phrase », une seule, se termine par un point [final, d'exclamation ou d'interrogation], peut avoir de la ponctuation interne ",/; /:/ [...], et qu'elle doit avant tout avoir un sens. (Il ne doit y avoir qu'UN SEUL POINT dans votre phrase - à la fin.) Le but ultime est de faire une seule phrase complexe, mais courte... Je le répète : elle doit avoir un sens et sa logique interne !
Cet exercice est TRES difficile, c'est pourquoi il demande beaucoup de réflexion et d'attention, de rigueur aussi dans l'application des règles. Vous ne devez le poster QU'UNE FOIS (ne faire qu'un seul exemplaire).
Pour que chacun ait la possibilité de travailler avec nous, cet exercice a des niveaux différents. Vous pouvez choisir celui qui vous convient :
Le niveau fera une seule phrase en moins de 80 mots.
Le niveau une seule phrase et toujours 60 mots, au plus.
Le niveau **, pour les plus habiles, fera une phrase de moins de 40 mots...
I'm sure you'll have inspiration...

Here are the words:

- To STAND – To PROVE – a LETTER - ADMIRATION – STRAIGHT – LIBERATED – SOONER OR LATER – WHEREAS + un infinitif passé.

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C'est parti pour une " très jolie phrase correcte et courte ! "
May THE FORCE be with all of us! ☀️ ☀️ ... HAVE A GREAT HOLIDAY!

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Réponse : Playing with words/46 de icare29, postée le 08-08-2023 à 11:27:09 (S | E)
Hello dear Here4u...here is my summer homework....


To STAND ? To PROVE ? a LETTER - ADMIRATION ? STRAIGHT ? LIBERATED ? SOONER OR LATER ? WHEREAS un infinitif passé.

The professor says :" I STAND in favour of this vaccine, the results PROVE a STRAIGHT amelioration for everyone, I keep all my ADMIRATION for it , in that LETTER I recognise to HAVE already EXPERIENCED it, SOONER OR LATER you will be LIBERATED from your illness, WHEREAS others will remain in bad health".
42 words

Thanks a lot for your correction and observations

Have excellent holidays

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Réponse : Playing with words/46 de magie8, postée le 08-08-2023 à 14:53:17 (S | E)
Hello, Je prefere cet exercice: pas trop long, pas trop souvent et une fois fini c' est bon, on attend tranquillement la correction.

The slaves were LIBERATED, Jenny STOOD filled with ADMIRATION reading A LETTER that PROVED it; whereas her husband seemed TO HAVE greatly PARTICIPATED in, he was coming STRAIGHT home; SOONER OR LATER he would received the honours. 37

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Réponse : Playing with words/46 de littlerene24, postée le 14-08-2023 à 21:21:33 (S | E)
Hello dear her4u, here is my sentence.

All of them STOOD up, full of ADMIRATION, but WHEREAS they could HAVE FELT happy, LIBERATED, they had the STRAIGHT sensation that this LETTER did not PROVE anything and that SOONER OR LATER this ADMIRATION will be betrayed. (38 words)

As magie8 says, once finished, all it's good, just waiting for the correction.

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Réponse : Playing with words/46 de here4u, postée le 15-08-2023 à 13:48:44 (S | E)

If you want to work a little more, you may suggest improvements to the different sentences…
Don’t forget I’m always very happy to get your suggestions!

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Réponse : Playing with words/46 de here4u, postée le 28-08-2023 à 14:09:10 (S | E)
Hello Dears!

Il est grand temps de réfléchir à votre phrase ... et de la poster !
A très vite !

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Réponse : Playing with words/46 de mad14, postée le 29-08-2023 à 15:34:24 (S | E)
Bonjour Here4U - Une phrase un peu longue... Pourriez-vous me dire ce qu'est un infinitif passé?


The children STAND in front of the memorial, back STRAIGHT, they PROVE their ADMIRATION to fighters whose names are engraved in gold LETTERS, to have LIBERATED our country; SOONER OR LATER they will continue to dream of peace WHEREAS wars ravage the world. (43 words)

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Réponse : Playing with words/46 de here4u, postée le 31-08-2023 à 22:44:48 (S | E)
Hello dears!

Voici, comme d'habitude, vos phrases à peine modifiées afin de ne pas vous trahir...
Bravo à vous qui avez tenté votre chance, et presque toujours très bien réussi ce défi difficile !



- The professor says: "I STAND in favour of this vaccine; the results PROVE a STRAIGHT improvement for everyone; I keep all my ADMIRATION for it; in that LETTER I recognise I HAVE already EXPERIENCED it; SOONER OR LATER you will be LIBERATED from your illness, WHEREAS others will remain in bad health". 52 words



- The slaves were LIBERATED; Jenny STOOD filled with ADMIRATION reading A LETTER that PROVED it; although her husband seemed TO HAVE greatly PARTICIPATED in the action, he came STRAIGHT home; SOONER OR LATER he would received the honours. 38 words



- All of them STOOD up, full of ADMIRATION; yet WHEREAS they could HAVE FELT happy, LIBERATED, they had the STRAIGHT sensation that this LETTER did not PROVE anything and that SOONER OR LATER this ADMIRATION would be betrayed. (38 words)



- The children STAND in front of the memorial, with STRAIGHT backs, they PROVE their ADMIRATION to fighters whose names are engraved in gold LETTERS for LIBERATING our country; SOONER OR LATER they will continue to dream of peace WHEREAS wars ravage the world. (43 words)


Well done, you four! Congrats on this great work!

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