Playing with words /50

Playing with words /50
Message de here4u posté le 05-12-2023 à 15:52:06 (S | E | F)
Hello dear Friends!

Voici votre nouveau challenge ! "Playing and working with words"... La date limite pour cet exercice est fin décembre 2023.
Je vous rappelle que cet exercice a des règles qui doivent être respectées. Lisez-les bien si vous ne les connaissez pas ! Ce travail est loin d'être un jeu... mais il peut être très ludique... Il vous laisse également toute liberté de choisir votre thème!

Using THE 8 WORDS given below (the 2 verbs can be put in whatever tenses or forms you fancy but MUST remain verbs!), 2 adjectives or adverbs, 2 nouns and 2 link words, + a given structure and the suitable punctuation, search your minds, think hard and create AN ONLY meaningful SENTENCE. "Easy", isn't it? (In fact, it's more easily said than done and advanced learners or natives can step in!! )

- You CANNOT change the nature of the words!
- You CANNOT use two or more compulsory words consecutively!

PLEASE, WHEN YOU WRITE YOUR SENTENCE, PUT CAPITALS TO THE GIVEN WORDS! [and specify the number of words at the end.]

Je vous rappelle qu'« une phrase », une seule, se termine par un point [final, d'exclamation ou d'interrogation], peut avoir de la ponctuation interne ",/; /:/ [...], et qu'elle doit avant tout avoir un sens. (Il ne doit y avoir qu'UN SEUL POINT dans votre phrase - à la fin.) Le but ultime est de faire une seule phrase complexe, mais courte... Je le répète : elle doit avoir un sens et sa logique interne !
Cet exercice est TRES difficile, c'est pourquoi il demande beaucoup de réflexion et d'attention, de rigueur aussi dans l'application des règles. Vous ne devez le poster QU'UNE FOIS (ne faire qu'un seul exemplaire).
Pour que chacun ait la possibilité de travailler avec nous, cet exercice a des niveaux différents. Vous pouvez choisir celui qui vous convient :
Le niveau fera une seule phrase en moins de 80 mots.
Le niveau une seule phrase et toujours 60 mots, au plus.
Le niveau **, pour les plus habiles, fera une phrase de moins de 40 mots...
I'm sure you'll have inspiration...

Here are the words:

- To INCLUDE - To SEARCH - a WING - a SMILE - CEASELESS - TREMBLING - BY THE TIME (:1 mot) - NOT YET (: 1 mot)- et une expression d'une petite quantité.
Lien internet


C'est parti pour une " très jolie phrase correcte et courte ! "
May THE FORCE be with all of us! ☀️ ☀️

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Réponse : Playing with words /50 de icare29, postée le 07-12-2023 à 10:31:38 (S | E)
- Hello dear Here4u, here is my sentence.

To INCLUDE - To SEARCH - a WING - a SMILE - CEASELESS - TREMBLING - BY THE TIME (:1 mot) - NOT YET (: 1 mot)- et une expression d'une petite quantité.
Lien internet


The plane has NOT landed YET ; he feels A LITTLE tired from the CEASELESS turbine noise and TREMBLING by fear because of wing vibrations and BY THE TIME HE REACHES London, with a satisfied SMILE , the custom documents INCLUDING passport will have been searched . 40 words

thanks for your correction and relevant explanations

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Réponse : Playing with words /50 de happynutmeg13, postée le 08-12-2023 à 19:37:15 (S | E)
Hello Here4u and many thanks !

I suggest this sentence :
With a distracted SMILE, I was watching birds, INCLUDING youngs, their wings still fuzzy, NOT YET very strong in the CEASELESS wind, SEARCHING the TREMBLING trees for SOME places to be safe in BY THE TIME winter comes. 37.

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Réponse : Playing with words /50 de here4u, postée le 16-12-2023 à 16:51:54 (S | E)
Hello dear writers!

Don't forget this challenge! You still have a lot of time to write your sentence! I'm counting on you...

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Réponse : Playing with words /50 de lucile83, postée le 30-12-2023 à 11:15:00 (S | E)
UP :
Hello !

- To INCLUDE - To SEARCH - a WING - a SMILE - CEASELESS - TREMBLING - BY THE TIME (:1 mot) - NOT YET (: 1 mot)- et une expression d'une petite quantité.

BY THE TIME he was SEARCHING, he didn't INCLUDE he was TREMBLING because the bird he had let go with a SMILE had a damaged WING, but he remembered it was NOT YET outside and was CEASELESS singing on the LITTLE xmas tree. 36 words

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Réponse : Playing with words /50 de here4u, postée le 31-12-2023 à 15:42:07 (S | E)
Hello dears!

Voici vos phrases, corrigées à minima, comme toujours. Merci à nos participants, merci d'avoir eu le courage de négliger vos préparatifs un petit moment afin de travailler ici, avec nous.


- The plane had NOT landed YET; Ray felt A LITTLE tired from the CEASELESS turbine noise and TREMBLING WITH fear because of WING vibrations; BY THE TIME he reached London, with a satisfied SMILE, his luggage, the customS documents INCLUDING passport will have been SEARCHED. 40 words.


- With a distracted SMILE, I was watching birds, INCLUDING young ones, their wings still fuzzy, NOT YET strong in the CEASELESS wind, SEARCHING the TREMBLING trees for SOME places to be safe B Y THE TIME winter comes. 37 words.


- BY THE TIME he was SEARCHING, he didn't INCLUDE ( ?)/ realise he was TREMBLING because the bird he had let go with a SMILE had a damaged WING, but he remembered it was NOT YET outside and was (CEASELESSly singing on the LITTLE Xmas tree. 36 words


HAVE A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR!

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