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Correction/simple sentences
Message from san99 posted on 09-06-2012 at 20:42:09 (D | E | F)
Hello,

I think I must tell you that I am really enjoying interacting with the members of this forum, because they care to reply your queries and help you to correct the wrong sentences.
I have written a few very simple sentences below, I would really appreciate if anyone could check these for the correction.
Thank you in advance for helping me.

The story I am reading right now is of horror genre.
The laptop she is carrying now has a touch keyboard in it.
The water you are drinking today is not pure.
The type of acne you have can't be treated without a proper treatment.
The music CD your friend sent hadn't any classic song in it.

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Edited by lucile83 on 09-06-2012 22:36

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Re: Correction/simple sentences from gerondif, posted on 10-06-2012 at 22:21:31 (D | E)
Hello,

The story I am reading right now is of horror genre(bizarre).
The laptop she is carrying now has a touch keyboard in it.
The water you are drinking today is not pure.
The type of acne you have can't be treated without a proper treatment.
The music CD your friend sent hadn't any classic song in it.
"didn't have" would be more common, hadn't is an auxiliary verb which normally would be followed by a past participle
I hadn't finished when he arrived.

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Re: Correction/simple sentences from san99, posted on 10-06-2012 at 22:34:55 (D | E)
Hello Gerondif,
Thanks a lot for reviewing my content. I am happy that you had a look at it and highlighted the mistakes. I am editing the content in which you found mistakes, and here you go:

The story I am reading right now is based on a horror genre.
The music CD your friend sent hadn't had ( I guess it reads well now, isn't it)any classic song in it.

Thank you for your support
Sa

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