Lettre motivation/aide
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Message de paulinem posté le 05-12-2014 à 18:01:42 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Alors tout d'abord désolée si je ne poste pas au bon endroit, je ne connais pas encore bien le site
Ensuite, j'ai besoin de votre aide car je ne suis vraiment pas bonne en anglais et je dois rendre une lettre de motivation la semaine prochaine...
Pourriez-vous corriger les erreurs que vous repérez? (il doit y en avoir...)
Merci d'avance
Admission service
Oxford Rd
Manchester M13 9PL
Royaume-Uni
Object: Application for admission in Zoology
Lady, Sir,
Your university has among the best of the world: 49th in the world, 11th in Europe and seventh in the UK according to The Times Higher Education World University. Your experience and your reputation make you the university where we must to be. It is why I want to integrate your university.
Currently student in 2nd year in Economics and Management in the University of xxx, France, I would like to go in your university to study Zoologie. Certainly , it has nothing to do with my current curriculum but I always love animals and I have a scientific grate A so ask to selected entry requirement. Also, I think my experience in economics gave me a solid foundation in mathematics and allowed me to understand the university's operation.
I remain at your disposal for any questions.
Hoping to soon join your community, I beg you to accept my respectful greetings
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-12-2014 18:20
Message de paulinem posté le 05-12-2014 à 18:01:42 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Alors tout d'abord désolée si je ne poste pas au bon endroit, je ne connais pas encore bien le site
Ensuite, j'ai besoin de votre aide car je ne suis vraiment pas bonne en anglais et je dois rendre une lettre de motivation la semaine prochaine...
Pourriez-vous corriger les erreurs que vous repérez? (il doit y en avoir...)
Merci d'avance
Admission service
Oxford Rd
Manchester M13 9PL
Royaume-Uni
Object: Application for admission in Zoology
Lady, Sir,
Your university has among the best of the world: 49th in the world, 11th in Europe and seventh in the UK according to The Times Higher Education World University. Your experience and your reputation make you the university where we must to be. It is why I want to integrate your university.
Currently student in 2nd year in Economics and Management in the University of xxx, France, I would like to go in your university to study Zoologie. Certainly , it has nothing to do with my current curriculum but I always love animals and I have a scientific grate A so ask to selected entry requirement. Also, I think my experience in economics gave me a solid foundation in mathematics and allowed me to understand the university's operation.
I remain at your disposal for any questions.
Hoping to soon join your community, I beg you to accept my respectful greetings
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-12-2014 18:20
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