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Message de mbellot posté le 02-02-2015 à 12:59:46 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je recherche actuellement un stage pour aller en Angleterre cet été et suis intéressée pour travailler dans un musée. Ce serait vraiment super sympa si quelqu'un pouvait me corriger
Merci pour vos réponses.
Et petite question bonus : comment dit-on baccalauréat scientifique mention européenne et très bien.
Dear Barry Chandler,
Since my childhood, I have always been keen on sciences, and more particularly biology and geology. That's why I am currently in scientific preparatory class. At the end of those two intense course years, I hope I will access an engineering school. However, my English is lacking.
I have discovered on your website that you offer language placements and that's why I am writing to you. I saw the job you propose involves reception work and summer visitor surveys. If I had the chance to work in your wonderful museum, I would give all my energy in order to receive visitors as best as I can! Moreover, I find the idea of working in a museum about Agatha Christie, explorers, and lots more very exciting, not to mention the Global Geopark. It must be very gripping ! I admire museums, because they are safeguarding the knowledge, and education is something I find most important. That is why I am currently taking the BAFA, a non-professionnal diploma in animation for children.
Besides, I am sociable and very opening to others cultures. It would be a great experience to learn more about your beautiful country, not so far from ours. I would enjoy sharing my culture although.
For all of the above reasons , I am really motivated about joining your museum on this summer. It would be much more than an improvement of language skills !
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-02-2015 13:07
Message de mbellot posté le 02-02-2015 à 12:59:46 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je recherche actuellement un stage pour aller en Angleterre cet été et suis intéressée pour travailler dans un musée. Ce serait vraiment super sympa si quelqu'un pouvait me corriger
Merci pour vos réponses. Et petite question bonus : comment dit-on baccalauréat scientifique mention européenne et très bien.
Dear Barry Chandler,
Since my childhood, I have always been keen on sciences, and more particularly biology and geology. That's why I am currently in scientific preparatory class. At the end of those two intense course years, I hope I will access an engineering school. However, my English is lacking.
I have discovered on your website that you offer language placements and that's why I am writing to you. I saw the job you propose involves reception work and summer visitor surveys. If I had the chance to work in your wonderful museum, I would give all my energy in order to receive visitors as best as I can! Moreover, I find the idea of working in a museum about Agatha Christie, explorers, and lots more very exciting, not to mention the Global Geopark. It must be very gripping ! I admire museums, because they are safeguarding the knowledge, and education is something I find most important. That is why I am currently taking the BAFA, a non-professionnal diploma in animation for children.
Besides, I am sociable and very opening to others cultures. It would be a great experience to learn more about your beautiful country, not so far from ours. I would enjoy sharing my culture although.
For all of the above reasons , I am really motivated about joining your museum on this summer. It would be much more than an improvement of language skills !
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-02-2015 13:07
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