Correction/Lettre motivation
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Message de lintello45 posté le 10-03-2016 à 18:42:44 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Voilà, j'ai fait ma lettre de motivation comme demandé si je veux poursuivre la section anglais en seconde européenne. Je voulais savoir s'il y a quelques erreurs de formulation ou de syntaxe et de formules de politesse pour finir...
Merci à tous pour vos réponses!
Object : aplication of integration in european classe de seconde
Madam the Principal,
I am writting to annouce to you my motivation to integrate a European classe de seconde. This course enable to earn an excellent register in english.
In fact, be belingual is an extra luck as much in the professional world as in the private life. Firstly, the english will to me useful in the professional field because I am planning to become security researcher, secondly, I am attracted by the Anglo-Saxon culture.
I already travel to London. I toy with the idea of move in the United States in the Silicon Valley later.
I would like to study in european seconde, thanks to that, I can considerably improve my knowledge in english. I like particularly this subject, because I already choose to deal with it integrating in 4ème and in 3ème the european section of my high school.
Moreover, on the recommendation of my teachers, I watch as often as possible, with great pleasure, english films, series in the original language. I also begin to read englsih books.
I am aware of the job I will have to do, but I feel enough motivated and invested in my scolarity to face up to it like I already did to date. I have currently very good results which demonstrates my implication in my school years.
I would be grateful if you look the time to consider my application, thank you for your time and attention.
Yours faithfully,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-03-2016 23:09
Message de lintello45 posté le 10-03-2016 à 18:42:44 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Voilà, j'ai fait ma lettre de motivation comme demandé si je veux poursuivre la section anglais en seconde européenne. Je voulais savoir s'il y a quelques erreurs de formulation ou de syntaxe et de formules de politesse pour finir...
Merci à tous pour vos réponses!
Object : aplication of integration in european classe de seconde
Madam the Principal,
I am writting to annouce to you my motivation to integrate a European classe de seconde. This course enable to earn an excellent register in english.
In fact, be belingual is an extra luck as much in the professional world as in the private life. Firstly, the english will to me useful in the professional field because I am planning to become security researcher, secondly, I am attracted by the Anglo-Saxon culture.
I already travel to London. I toy with the idea of move in the United States in the Silicon Valley later.
I would like to study in european seconde, thanks to that, I can considerably improve my knowledge in english. I like particularly this subject, because I already choose to deal with it integrating in 4ème and in 3ème the european section of my high school.
Moreover, on the recommendation of my teachers, I watch as often as possible, with great pleasure, english films, series in the original language. I also begin to read englsih books.
I am aware of the job I will have to do, but I feel enough motivated and invested in my scolarity to face up to it like I already did to date. I have currently very good results which demonstrates my implication in my school years.
I would be grateful if you look the time to consider my application, thank you for your time and attention.
Yours faithfully,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-03-2016 23:09
Réponse: Correction/Lettre motivation de lopezmyriam23, postée le 10-03-2016 à 19:01:44 (S | E)
Bonjour,
classe = français
English (majuscule)
I would be grateful if you look the time to consider my application ( je le mettrais au début de la lettre)
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